ENG 112 College Composition II                                         Nancy McTaggart
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You chose the following answer to Question 1: 

a)  In "A Story of an Hour," Kate Chopin has written an amazing story about a married woman's feelings.   

This story is about a married woman's feelings, so this is a true statement.  It is not a good thesis statement, however.  

1)  The assignment is to write an argumentative essay about the theme of the work.  The theme is not stated in this sentence.

2)  It is an accurate statement about the story, so it is a fact.  An argumentative thesis must state a position or an observation that others could disagree with.  This one does not.

3)  The story is characterized as "amazing" in this sentence.  While "amazing" is not a fact, it is not something that can be proved either.  "Amazing" is entirely a subjective judgment, so it is not a suitable word for an argumentative thesis.


Of the remaining choices, which is the best thesis statement?

     Choice b)  In "A Story of an Hour," Kate Chopin is showing that men and women have complicated relationships.        

     Choice c)  In "A Story of an Hour," Kate Chopin is arguing that Mrs. Mallard would be happier if she were unmarried.  

     Choice d)  In "A Story of an Hour," Kate Chopin is arguing that women are happier if they are unmarried.