ENG 112 College Composition II                                         Nancy McTaggart
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You chose the following answer to Question 2: 

   Choice b)      

 "They said she had died of heart disease --of the joy that kills."  

Mrs. Mallard, the main character in Kate Chopin's work, "The Story of an Hour," dies at the end of the story when she learns that the husband she had believed dead, returns alive and well.  Through the story Chopin communicates that even if women are happily married,  the "joy" of marriage destroys a significant part of them.

This introduction opens with a curious quote from the story:  "joy" is generally not associated with killing.  The sentence that follows is a very brief summary of the story that provides at least a partial explanation of the opening quotation.  The final sentence of the introduction is a thesis statement.  It is connected to the opening quote by the repeated use of the word, "joy."  This introduction provokes the reader's curiosity, provides the reader a sense of the direction the essay will go, and gives a context through the summary for understanding the essay that follows.  This is a good introductory paragraph.

Go on Question 3.